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Whole-body tingles Get rid of excess jiggles Wind flung snow on trees April 25, 2021

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Date: 4/28/2021 5:06:00 PM
I am feeling cold after reading this one.. Lol.. Well done
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Date: 4/27/2021 7:03:00 PM
I see this as telling me to go and lose some weight. I truly need to get rid of excess jiggled because truly, my body tingles. Great work of art here.
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Date: 4/26/2021 10:54:00 AM
It shows that we're at one with nature. Tom
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Date: 4/26/2021 11:21:00 AM
Absolutely Dear Tom, we have a desire to be near nature. This built-in desire may be the result of our close mutual connection. Appreciate your reading, best regards
Date: 4/26/2021 7:52:00 AM
I really like the snapshot. It reminds me of a tree by the coast that has been tossed in one direction for many years by those sea/ocean breezes. Creative lines penned. Your visit to my page is encouraging. Sara
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Date: 4/26/2021 8:35:00 AM
Thank you so much for your motivational words Dear Sara Have a wonderful day //Lasaad
Date: 4/25/2021 11:26:00 PM
Impressive, dear Lasaad. Greetings!
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Date: 4/26/2021 1:08:00 AM
Thanks, dear Demetrios, appreciate your kind words// Cheers
Date: 4/25/2021 10:30:00 AM
Hi Lasaad, Good haiku, my dad would say,” it's going to rain,” when he had aches in his joints. He often got it right! I enjoyed the read. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/25/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thanks, Dear Alexis, for reading and the kind words; I enjoyed the story about your dad, Have a wonderful day
Date: 4/25/2021 8:24:00 AM
Great haiku, loved it.
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Date: 4/25/2021 11:21:00 AM
Thanks Victor for reading and commenting
Date: 4/25/2021 4:24:00 AM
I like the reminder that our body responds to weather changes.
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Date: 4/25/2021 11:24:00 AM
Thanks, Caren, well said, I enjoyed ( our body responds to weather changes) that,s true. have a good day

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