Chilly Feeling

Whole-body tingles

                          Get rid of excess jiggles

                                     Wind flung snow on trees






April 25, 2021

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Paghunda Zahid

April 28, 2021 at 5:06 PM

I am feeling cold after reading this one.. Lol.. Well done

Funom Makama

April 27, 2021 at 7:03 PM

I see this as telling me to go and lose some weight. I truly need to get rid of excess jiggled because truly, my body tingles. Great work of art here.

Tom Cunningham

April 26, 2021 at 10:54 AM

It shows that we're at one with nature. Tom

Sotto Poet

April 26, 2021 at 11:21 AM

Absolutely Dear Tom, we have a desire to be near nature. This built-in desire may be the result of our close mutual connection. Appreciate your reading, best regards

Sara Kendrick

April 26, 2021 at 7:52 AM

I really like the snapshot. It reminds me of a tree by the coast that has been tossed in one direction for many years by those sea/ocean breezes. Creative lines penned. Your visit to my page is encouraging. Sara

Sotto Poet

April 26, 2021 at 8:35 AM

Thank you so much for your motivational words Dear Sara Have a wonderful day //Lasaad

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 25, 2021 at 11:26 PM

Impressive, dear Lasaad. Greetings!

Sotto Poet

April 26, 2021 at 1:08 AM

Thanks, dear Demetrios, appreciate your kind words// Cheers

Alexis Y.

April 25, 2021 at 10:30 AM

Hi Lasaad, Good haiku, my dad would say,” it's going to rain,” when he had aches in his joints. He often got it right! I enjoyed the read. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet

April 25, 2021 at 11:19 AM

Thanks, Dear Alexis, for reading and the kind words; I enjoyed the story about your dad, Have a wonderful day