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A faultless tributary lowered in frigid water. There is no exact development profound inside. The chaotic life above is evaporating blunter. Inside, the eternal silence is deafening, sighed. The lake, in every case near the hustle of life. How might it be so still when all is livid strife? The cold water surrounded my heart and mind. I'm left confused by the quiet feel of grind. Isn't it time for peace? To wrest silence. I was overwhelmed by serenity and tieless. I bid farewell to the source of my disturbing. It's despairing yet still hopeless standing. After a flood and a lifetime, it rowed. A town lost in the appalling cloud.
Written: October 16, 2021

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Date: 10/17/2021 5:39:00 AM
When your surrounded by chaos and confused by the quiet peace of the lake.
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Date: 10/16/2021 10:28:00 PM
A stupendous sonnet. Many calamities around.
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Date: 10/16/2021 12:38:00 PM
Some of the flooding that has hit people this year has been really bad but you might be speaking metaphorically. I enjoyed reading this work. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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