Chilly

I made coffee and had a fire
Warming this cool October morn
Come close let us fill heart's desire

I made coffee and had a fire
In warm sunlight amour transpires
Our rekindled spark of love born

I made coffee and had a fire
Warming this cool October morn

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Gail Debole

Date: 10/21/2014 6:11:00 PM

Very nice poem...I was just thinking of having some tea. Like the way you expressed your thoughts about this time of year.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/14/2014 1:33:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this lovely write, Sara. It has that nice, cozy, heartwarming feel to it. Really well done!

Jack Horne

Date: 10/11/2014 3:16:00 PM

warm, romantic write, Sara : ) Haven't left a comment here on your sonnet - as I've read it in email - but I think it really works well

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2014 4:03:00 PM

this sounds nice Sara, I'm enjoying the warm air, while it last. ;0 Love Linda

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 12:55:00 PM

Sara, it's not cool down here in Texas yet, Waiting for it to be chilling. I like this, Enjoy your day, Love ~SKAT~

Jack Horne

Date: 10/6/2014 3:40:00 PM

aww, sweet romantic write, Sara - heart-warming!

Cory Long

Date: 10/5/2014 5:41:00 PM

nice job with this sara. I have always enjoyed reading your work. Hope to read more of it. good night

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/5/2014 4:05:00 AM

very beautiful pen sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/4/2014 4:33:00 PM

i'll be there in a while for a coffee break, sara... this is amazingly quilled.. huggs

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/4/2014 9:23:00 AM

like this Sara, you fit the form so well...

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/4/2014 9:10:00 AM

Chilly mornings, and evenings, are made for romance...so nice to snuggle.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2014 7:37:00 AM

- A new and beautiful October day - Enjoy reading your beautiful poem, Sara - The network "fell out" at my place yesterday .... only got into my own poems .... much to read today :))) - Happy weekend!- oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2014 9:11:00 PM

I love how romantic this triolet is. Did you see Freddie cancelled his triolet contest? I am hoping he does not mean it because I was ready to post one soon. Where is the fair you are going to , Sara?

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/3/2014 8:34:00 PM

Beautiful Triolet Sara.I hope you are feeling well.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/3/2014 4:31:00 PM

Great triolet Sara!It sounds so heartwarming! And I just have to have coffee everyday at least two cups or I am in trouble.lol. Can I come over tomorrow and have a nice cup with you? Lol Hugs! xxxxx D.