Chilling Blues From Davy Jones' Locker

Beneath the cool and seemingly serene Atlantic Ocean
Lay the remains of the Bermuda Triangle’s commotion

Ships and aircraft rest far beneath the perpetual sea waves
Mystery surrounds what led so many to watery graves

“It’s blue on blue,” the perplexed pilot of Flight 19 exclaimed
On this mirage deaths of all training crew members are blamed

The commander could not tell which way was up and which was down
Sea and sky blending as one produced an undersea ghost town

Where spirits of all those lost over many hundreds of years
Ponder fate in Davy Jones’ locker of all who disappear

*Entry for Francine’s contest: “Blue on Blue on Blue”
(Chose Blue Ocean)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/5/2011 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Francine's "Blue on blue on blue" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2011 2:11:00 AM
more than an HM for me , carols... nontheless, special congrats on your win! :) huggs
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:05:00 PM
congrats on this one, CArolyn, one that was quite unique in the contest.
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Date: 7/1/2011 5:52:00 PM
c u there neath me carolyn, me hopes your bones are better, Atlantis rises once again, pyramids will suprise ya! xo, Don
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Date: 7/1/2011 5:41:00 PM
Great story Carolyn. I haven't heard of ship wrecks there recently. Have they broken the curse? congratulations Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:18:00 PM
wonderful entry Carolyn, congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 6/29/2011 9:48:00 AM
I love it when you take this route with your entries Carolyn, awesome and informative.. All the best with this one as well.. Love Wilma
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Date: 6/29/2011 4:40:00 AM
excellent Carolyn. Interesting take on the contest about reality and it's mysteries. Super. Gotta be a winner. Ingenius.
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:44:00 PM
oops, sorry, I mixed up contests. The quatrains was Barbara's. Sorry about that! I bet your DAvy's Locker could be a winner for sure!
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:42:00 PM
It's a very strange place, that Triangle. Hey, Carolyn, wasn't this contest supposed to be quatrains? I get so mixed up myself with all the contests, I could be wrong Anyway, you chose and intriguing topic!!
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Date: 6/28/2011 8:12:00 AM
Masterful!!Great images expressed so clear...You should place high for this beauty...Thank you for supporting my recent win love.......
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Date: 6/28/2011 7:26:00 AM
Lovely informative write - I haven't read anything about the BT for ages and this one has me aching to read up on the latest theories : )
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Date: 6/28/2011 4:57:00 AM
Mysterious and attention-capturing. :)
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Date: 6/28/2011 4:04:00 AM
Interesting topic, well written, enjoyed
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Date: 6/28/2011 4:01:00 AM
great entry, good luck in the contest :)
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