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Chillin"

it's almost sundown I checked the clock It's almost Thanksgiving Everything's soaked Rescued carrots from rain thawed dirt Hot soup eased the chill cool chablis eased the pain Cat keeps sliding from blue jeans lap to resettle higher and slowly reslide Claws are verboten She knows Time for a refill This poem's done Cat's at the window studying darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/13/2009 1:07:00 PM
I like the way you chill. Great write!
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Date: 12/5/2008 2:53:00 PM
I enjoyed the informal style of this poem. A bit of humor for the reader to enjoy. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 11/25/2008 2:28:00 PM
I just love this...so true to life..like the chablis..I could do with a refill myself. this is just great. BG
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