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Chill of Winter

The winter crawls upon, the tuft of wet grass, wet from the morning dew As the chill of winter, shivers down, the coarse chest of tress Soon rodents shovel holes, In search of warmth

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Date: 3/31/2024 8:30:00 PM
Grand images, Arastu, on the cold creep of winter. One suggestion, however, is to remove all the commas and let your fine free verse flow uninterrupted by pauses. Best wishes, Brian
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 4/9/2024 9:03:00 PM
I see, I do tend to use a lot of punctuations. Thank you for the feedback, I will look into this for my future writes.

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