Child's View

I LOVE THIS - sounds like a mid trip to Safeway =)

haha nice one! Cindy You ever almost get run over by granny on her motorized cart in Wally world, WATCH OUT!!!clean up in isle 4, perhaps a paramedic as well.... JK.

haha nice one! Cindy You ever almost get run over by granny on her motorized cart in Wally world, WATCH OUT!!!clean up in isle 4, perhaps a paramedic as well.... JK.

Are you going through your second childhood Daver? If so, you need a spanking telling those "old folks" to go away. We are the salt of the earth as I see it anyhow! :)

Ain't it the truth! So well composed... and you even managed a rhyme! BRAVO, my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

very nice and funny.....i like it

Beautiful poem here - I really enjoyed this unique piece. Wow! That's really cool. Pikes Peak seems like an interesting place. I have never been there myself, but I want to go to Colorado Springs some day. The book takes place in the future and they built an awesome observatory. I thought Pikes Peak would be a nice place to study stars and such. Always, Laura

Very close.... It's a whistling tea kettle.

Let us stay!

hahaha. This is so cute. I really like it, Daver! hope you had a nice Friday like i did.

Smile........well said of this child !Love it...lol..so good.- Have a lovely weekend! (my last poem,is from child`s mouth to - "God has taken everything") - oxox love Anne-Lise

It would be terribly sad Daver, if all children thought like this. The very young don't, it's as if they haven't been away long from where'd they'd come, They don't see wrinkles but something else that is more beautiful, of which they are too young to describe. All I know for sure, is that you're the bestest guru muse, I could ever want!:) You're a sweetheart, Daver!! Love, Mikki

Haha...Daver enjoyed the view of this child.

Daver ha, I like it..David

Not all children think like that, sir. Atleast, I can't remember I ever had such views.