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Child's Milestones

For our son’s milestones, we rejoice seeing his choice for triumph gain conquering pain. Thanking the Lord* that he strives well we let doubts quell since hope persists as heart insists. Victory by faith we do claim midst progress aim for special child notably styled. *2Chronicles 5:13 …Make one sound to be heard in praising and thanking the LORD; … For he is good; for his mercy endureth for ever… July 23, 2021 2nd place, "12 Lines In Rhyme" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Joseph May; judged on 7/26/2021.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2021 5:39:00 AM

A cheer for your son! Congratulations, Beata!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/27/2021 10:13:00 AM

We, too, rejoice with you as your special son grows and continues his journey with progress. And, we will make "one sound" of gratitude with you! Every time David makes even the smallest step of progress we send up fireworks of celebration. In our prayers. Congratulations! Sending you blessings my friend! Love your creative rhymes.

Joseph May

Date: 7/26/2021 12:34:00 PM

Wonderful write Beata, Congrats on your win

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/26/2021 10:27:00 AM

Hi Beata, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/26/2021 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/24/2021 8:34:00 AM

If only we could offer some praise to God every day I think we would feel better, be happier and live life fully. Thanks for your visit to my page. I enjoyed reading this one. Since it is probably for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/23/2021 1:56:00 PM

Nice piece Beata with nice rhyme and flow too. God bless your family and yourself. Blessings, Gordon