Beata Agustin Poet Rhyme

Child's Milestones

For our son’s milestones, we rejoice
seeing his choice
for triumph gain
conquering pain.

Thanking the Lord* that he strives well
we let doubts quell
since hope persists
as heart insists.

Victory by faith we do claim
midst progress aim
for special child
notably styled.

*2Chronicles 5:13 …Make one sound to be heard in praising and thanking the LORD; … For he is good; for his mercy endureth for ever…

July 23, 2021
2nd place, "12 Lines In Rhyme" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May; judged on 7/26/2021.

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Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2021 at 5:39 AM A cheer for your son! Congratulations, Beata!

Sam Kauffman July 27, 2021 at 10:13 AM We, too, rejoice with you as your special son grows and continues his journey with progress. And, we will make "one sound" of gratitude with you! Every time David makes even the smallest step of progress we send up fireworks of celebration. In our prayers. Congratulations! Sending you blessings my friend! Love your creative rhymes.

Joseph May July 26, 2021 at 12:34 PM Wonderful write Beata, Congrats on your win

Alexis Y. July 26, 2021 at 10:27 AM Hi Beata, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex July 26, 2021 at 10:16 AM Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2021 at 8:34 AM If only we could offer some praise to God every day I think we would feel better, be happier and live life fully. Thanks for your visit to my page. I enjoyed reading this one. Since it is probably for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara

Gordon Mcconnell July 23, 2021 at 1:56 PM Nice piece Beata with nice rhyme and flow too. God bless your family and yourself. Blessings, Gordon