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Child's First Toddle

your mild nudge
made me open my eyes....
child's first toddle

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2011 5:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Kash. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 12:34:00 PM

well, the first two rhyme but self is not an exact rhyme with the others. However, I don't think it will matter. soupmail.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/24/2011 4:26:00 PM

The simplicity of this image is mesmerizing. It is nice to follow your poetry and see the world thru your eyes. Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/23/2011 10:00:00 PM

awhhh, so soft and sweet.. back for a while, kashi dear.. come visit!

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 10/23/2011 11:05:00 AM

A tender write. Those tiny children grow up so fast! Nice one!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/22/2011 11:30:00 PM

Something to celebrate for sure. Is it you that is celebrating?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2011 7:13:00 PM

where is mother poem. I can't see it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2011 12:04:00 AM

In this one, I see a wife perhaps nudging her husband to watch their child's first toddle. Did I get it right? I know one time you used a child as a symbol and I got it wrong! Anyway, how I am seeing this one, it's darling!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/21/2011 5:01:00 PM

Are you a new father, Kash? Perhaps you were just moved by a baby's sweetness. Yes, I used the syllable counter and "increasing suicide rate" is seven syllables. Thanks for reading my poem, dear friend. I am traveling still, but trying my best to keep up. Love you, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2011 2:03:00 PM

luv is much like that little nudge Kash and a tender verse so sweetly penned..oh so happy we are all up and running once again.. and great captcha letters.. I need large print right now..haha... such a great sentiment luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2011 1:36:00 PM

Children are so warm and wonderfu..Enjoyed reading about a moment in time in a child's life..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Child's First Toddle

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