Children's Laughter

A ball thrown higher
     As breezes fall vivid leaves
          Children’s light laughter
                 Isolate and stigmatize
A lonely child in a crowd


11/2/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 15, 2012 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Su's "Tanka-The Pivot" contest Brittany. Love, Carol
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November 11, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Brittany, congrats in the tanka contest :-) always~ pd
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 10:49 AM
great contrast here, Brittany. congrats on the winners list.
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 12:38 PM
A child's laughter is like music to my ears - Lovely Brittany! Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 2:10 AM
I love the contast shown in this one.
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November 2, 2012 at 9:48 PM
Its a special gift to be able to notice the little things in life, very nicely done, blessings Carl
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