Children On the Battlefied

We had a good start
I gave you a heart
But daddy takes good hearts
And rips them apart

He sent us into a storm
It was aptly named Mourn
We looked so forlorn
How could we together form

Mommy slipped into a darker place
She never laughed and never ate
There was nothing good to put on her plate
No crumbs even to appreciate

And you had no laughter and play
After daddy took it all away
You kept waiting for a brighter day
With you wide eyes on display

That was the time I had to say
We have nothing left but to pray
Still waiting for that brighter day
One day he'll pay, oh yes he'll pay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 22, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Much better after rethinking this one
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May 22, 2016 at 12:46 PM
My best poems take me 5 minutes or less to write when I'm deep in the flow state. This is one that needs revision. I wasn't at full throttle. There are some good lines though that I'll keep.
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