Children of Pride

On the Isle of Man adrift in a rugged sea
the Children of Pride fell with Lucifer, they say,
fallen angels all, called Fairy, or Adhene….
fair of form yet stark are these sorrowful beauties.

The man-sized Adhene rule the other fairy
and often times wee small sprites dance upon their hand.
Both flit upon wings in a purple mountain’s lea
while men hide from the malevolent of their clan.

There darker kin dwell down deep within the caverns
and cause much misery in the heaviest fog,
Yet most are beauties, benevolent and quite kind
never troubling travelers as coming along.

With translucent wings, flaxen hair, and deep dark eyes,
safe within the rush of waterfalls they may hide.
Some say you can hear them sing if you sit awhile
for until Judgment Day right here they must abide.

And don’t forget to pray, when you walk near the tide
God save me, save me do, from the Children of pride.


*Adhene/The Manx fairies were called Adhene 
and known as Cloan ny moyrn, which means the Children of Pride/Ambition,
because they were regarded as having been fallen angels
 cast from heaven but too good for hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 15, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Debbie .. Congratulations on Anthony's Island contest. ~SKAT~
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March 10, 2014 at 6:43 PM
Adhene..I'll remember that..congrats on your win Debbie
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March 10, 2014 at 5:57 PM
Debbie I did not know this. Very interesting rhyme and nicely written. I can see how it placed as a win. congratulations! Connie
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March 10, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Congrats...so interesting...BG
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:53 AM
a write well researched and so captivating too love it Debbie congrats on win hugs
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August 26, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Amen!!!!!
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August 1, 2011 at 4:50 PM
Very good peice Debbie, well illuminated..
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August 1, 2011 at 12:14 PM
I can understand what you can say from past experience. We need to communicate' because I have a lot of question in my life! I adore this poem and wish to make it a favorite of mind. * Note, I entered your 'BALL' Contest and took the liberty of commenting on my self as well....... Now that take's balls. See you again! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS
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July 26, 2011 at 8:31 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Debbie. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your amazing work. Love, Carol
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