Children of a Different Sun

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Poetic Form: Rhyme

Inspired: 2024 June 15

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This Be my 2nd Choice

“We are all petals of imperfection sharing the same sun” - Silent One The sun can appear to be coldhearted be truly said by those of equal share the nature of them that had departed is small known to them that they truly care. Measured life are revisited, narrows, the bars you've set accord abilities, eagles soar above the heights of sparrows, divides pleasure from third-world courtesies. The befallen misreads dropping in-kind, yond their diligence forward forgivings, cause and effects, trust and obey in time, all life gifts be true to themselves living. We're created by one, who created the sun, ergo thrive, to grow in one accord for every time there is a season, we should rise to his glory and be thankful to be alive, the acts of the sun to rise and to set its course of reason, I'm happy to be holding onto His everlasting arms, I am grateful that I am protected from all of life's harms.

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