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Childhood Waters

I took a stroll one hot summer day
The sun glared with its hot rays 
As I walked beside the flowing waters of the river
At the reflecting light off the water I would gaze
Wading through the rippling rapids
The cool water ran 
While I stood and listened 
To the trickling of the water 
And watched it dance around around my legs
And flow away….



~9/26/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/11/2018 7:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Hannah. Well done.
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Date: 10/5/2018 6:05:00 AM
Beautiful poem Hannah.. Congratulations on place in the contest...
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Jane Doe
Date: 10/10/2018 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 9/27/2018 12:17:00 PM
Beautifully expressed. You have painted a wonderful scene of nature with your words.
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