Sotto Poet Poet Triolet

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Childhood Reminiscence

Written: October 31, 2023
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Wobbly words wrapped in weal walnut-white wood
Silk snare souvenirs and sturdy struck stinks.
Your whisper dragged me in and there withstood
Wobbly words wrapped in weal walnut-white wood
I climbed to be proud, not hide in a hood.
Bond with breezy star began with five blinks.
Wobbly words wrapped in weal walnut-white wood
Silk snare souvenirs and sturdy struck stinks.

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Bill Baker November 3, 2023 at 8:58 PM A fine Triolet poem, my dear friend. I love the alliterations throughout the poem. The joy of tree climbing as a boy. I can definitely relate. Thanks for sharing your poetic gift with us. Bill

Lynn D. November 2, 2023 at 5:07 AM Intelligent!

Ink Empress November 2, 2023 at 4:20 AM This is absolutely gorgeous dear Sotto, your use of alliterations in every line and descriptive word pairing throughout makes this appealing and beautiful to the eyes and souls of a reader! Especially love the line “ Silk snare souvenirs” and also “ Your whisper dragged me in and there withstood“ how deeply moving and heartfelt! Your way with expressing thoughts is always poetic and flows with captivating rhymes! I enjoyed reading this triolet! And seeing yours inspired me to write one too

Hilda Greenhough November 1, 2023 at 5:06 PM This poem allowed me to picture a small, lovable child. Thank you.

Vijay Pandit November 1, 2023 at 5:58 AM Your poem gives voice and meaning to childhood memories in superb word play and alliteration, my friend. Amazing talents you have---expressed through so many winning poems and forms.

Hiya Sharma October 31, 2023 at 11:12 PM Oh, this is a stunning triolet poem with amazing alliterations flowing throughout, I love your word combinations here, they provide a captivating flow to this write! "Walnut-white wood", "silk snare souvenirs", "Bond with breezy star began with five blinks" Ah, I'm enamored by these lines, they created a very intriguing ambience of childhood reminiscences.. Absolutely enjoyed reading this wonderful poem..