Childhood Reminiscence

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Written: October 31, 2023 __________________________________________ Wobbly words wrapped in weal walnut-white wood Silk snare souvenirs and sturdy struck stinks. Your whisper dragged me in and there withstood Wobbly words wrapped in weal walnut-white wood I climbed to be proud, not hide in a hood. Bond with breezy star began with five blinks. Wobbly words wrapped in weal walnut-white wood Silk snare souvenirs and sturdy struck stinks.

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/3/2023 8:58:00 PM

A fine Triolet poem, my dear friend. I love the alliterations throughout the poem. The joy of tree climbing as a boy. I can definitely relate. Thanks for sharing your poetic gift with us. Bill

Lynn D.

Date: 11/2/2023 5:07:00 AM

Intelligent!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/2/2023 4:20:00 AM

This is absolutely gorgeous dear Sotto, your use of alliterations in every line and descriptive word pairing throughout makes this appealing and beautiful to the eyes and souls of a reader! Especially love the line “ Silk snare souvenirs” and also “ Your whisper dragged me in and there withstood“ how deeply moving and heartfelt! Your way with expressing thoughts is always poetic and flows with captivating rhymes! I enjoyed reading this triolet! And seeing yours inspired me to write one too

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/1/2023 5:06:00 PM

This poem allowed me to picture a small, lovable child. Thank you.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/1/2023 2:31:00 PM

dearest Sotto--I found your Triolet captivating and alluring at the same time. I love both the alliteration and the imagery you created to subtly reminisce and express childhood memories. The line 'wobbly words wrapped in weal walnut-white wood' spoke to me at a deep level. Each of your poems is unique, constructed well with meaningful vocabulary. Your poem was a delight to read. Hope you have a pleasant Wednesday, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/1/2023 5:58:00 AM

Your poem gives voice and meaning to childhood memories in superb word play and alliteration, my friend. Amazing talents you have---expressed through so many winning poems and forms.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/31/2023 11:12:00 PM

Oh, this is a stunning triolet poem with amazing alliterations flowing throughout, I love your word combinations here, they provide a captivating flow to this write! "Walnut-white wood", "silk snare souvenirs", "Bond with breezy star began with five blinks" Ah, I'm enamored by these lines, they created a very intriguing ambience of childhood reminiscences.. Absolutely enjoyed reading this wonderful poem..