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my younger brother, Eddie, playing a 'fake' banjo which (in his mind) was real

he grew up becoming a musician and band teacher

CHILDHOOD REMEMBRANCES

In the sun-washed corners of childhood,
light gathered gently, 
and like marbles, 
laughter rolled loose across the floor.

We learned the first language of closeness~  
small secrets traded like treasures,  
each one stitching us into the same early story.

We wandered our backyard world  
as if it were vast, unchartered, and unnamed,  
drawing borders with sticks,  
letting the garden hose become a river  
that carried our shouts downstream. 
 
Hours blurred into water and sky,  
and time slipped past us  
with the ease of sand falling  
from into an hourglass

You colored everything
turning ordinary days  
into wild invention.  
I followed the bright arc  
of your imagination,  
gathering its shadows,  
spinning them into tales  
that stretched themselves  
far beyond the fence line.

Now, standing at the quiet edge  
of my grown life,  
I still carry your laughter~  
a small weightless charm  
against the heaviness of days.  
You remain my true north,  
steady in every remembered moment,  
every thread woven carefully  
into the fabric of the life we shared.
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