Childhood Mirth

There she was… so pretty in pink Full of mirth, reaching the sink To fall down, never did she think Since bubbles gave her joyous wink. With glee, she continued to play Preferring water more than clay Heeding mother’s call, she would delay Just to create sea-world display. Then her waterfalls cascaded Even the floor was invaded Thus, to clean she gladly decided Tidying what was once flooded. Back to her ocean, she had a boat sail Guiding, she yelled her cheering hail Till her boat became a space ship above the pail With her hands flying it so as not to fail. Rejoicing at her water-blessing delight She was reminded of God and His might Thanking the Lord* for the wondrous sight Now, she is ready to turn off the faucet, alright!
*1Chronicles 16:7 ...This psalm to thank the LORD... June 23, 2018 2nd Place, "Pure Childlike Fun and Enthusiasm" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger; judged on 6/30/2018.
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Date: 7/1/2018 1:28:00 AM
Congrats and thanks for sharing this piece.
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Date: 7/1/2018 12:49:00 AM
Aaah, the joys of flooding... congrats, Beata!
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Date: 6/30/2018 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely fun story. :)
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Date: 6/30/2018 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Beata, on your great 2nd place win.. Lovely story Hugs Eve ~`*
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