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8/21/2026 for Lento Soup Poetry Contest sponsored by Charles Messina

Childhood Makes its Final Descent - CM

“All grown-ups were once children... but only few of them remember it.” ~   Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince

Childhood's magic once cast spells of wonder. 
Wildwood berries turned to pirate's plunder. 
That bright hummingbird, extraordinary,
in flight, became a wish-bestowing fairy. 

Then, imagination made a carpet fly.
Men were heroes, never falling from the sky.
I miss that genie spell that lasts but twenty years. 
I kiss childhood goodbye as it disappears.
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Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 11:39 PM
Well you won again but I am not surprised. I had faved this one too. I have good taste! Congrats, my friend
Crandall Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 4:25 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I know - you have a pretty good track record!
Messina Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 4:03 PM
Ahh, those childhood memories. Great writing as usual, David. Congratulations on your well- deserved placement in my contest! Charlie
Crandall Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Thanks, Charles! I really enjoyed the form required for this content. I love all that rhyming!
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 7:04 AM
This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Crandall Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 11:59 AM
Thanks, Sara!
Godwin Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 8:51 PM
Beautifully and emotionally written. Most relatable; however, my 'genie' is still active and urging me to play. CayCay
Crandall Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 9:47 PM
Thanks, CayCay, Listen to that genie! 😀
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 8:31 PM
Sweet one, David... I can relate, although my childhood started at 20, when I freed myself from the grip of a noxious suburb, unrealistic expectations from parents, spoiled classmates everywhere I turned, etc. My childhood is over now though, buried in an overweight body and overall poor health. C'est la vie! ~ Gershon
Crandall Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 9:46 PM
Thanks, Gershon! Too bad about your health, my main issue is my back, other than that, I'm not too bad...well the years seem to take their toll on all of us. Sometimes, I feel like I'm remembering a childhood which isn't exactly like the one I actually had, strangely enough. My most fun years were probably in college.
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 12:11 AM
Fantastic poem. I think my favorite among all the lentos I am seeing. A sure fave. 👏
Crandall Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 9:42 PM
Thanks, Andrea 😊
Smith  Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 9:47 PM
A tender, nostalgic farewell to childhood’s transforming imagination. The pirate plunder, fairy hummingbird, and flying carpet beautifully evoke that enchanted perspective, while the final goodbye lands with quiet poignancy.🧚‍♂️🧚‍♀️
Crandall Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 9:42 PM
Thanks, Alison! 😊
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 2:57 PM
appreciate your example, and nicely penned.
Crandall Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 3:32 PM
Thanks, Sara! I'm pretty happy with this one.
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