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Childhood Dreams

Childhood still beckons me, in my ......................DREAMS Was the golden time spent by all - Tom, me and... YOU Dreams of different sort we .......... ................... HAD Of the colourful future - we all would be ............. IN Full of hopes and innocent ideas in .................... CHILDHOOD Yoyo, marbles, Tintin and Phantom .................... WERE The most common subjects of it which................. REALLY Enthralled us and made our childhood ................. FUNNY

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2015 7:35:00 AM

I enjoyed your nostalgic write Bobby.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/25/2015 12:07:00 AM

Thanks Richard... truly honoured.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2015 12:05:00 AM

this is a lovely memento of your childhood, Anindya. I really like it. One little grammar hint. In line three, take out "used to" If you use it, you have to say "we used to have" instead of "had" but you can just make the line read: dreams of a different sort we had!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/12/2015 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for pointing it ... really missed it... editing the same. Hugs, Bobby