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Childhood and Games Edited

"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy'
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Kids studying in my son's class
After school attend tuition class

Back home there is double work
Both school and tuition homework

They also attend  some other special course 
Its best for their future, parents reinforce

Full day they are busy
At the end they feel dizzy

Desire to come first
An unquenchable thirst

One day their brains will shatter
If within it is put so much matter

Many such kid's fare badly in exam
They cannot recall much in exam

Then extra burden is put on them
Special classes are arranged for them

I'm midst of all this childhood is lost
Physical exercise, laughter and fun is lost

Childhood is meant for enjoyment, games and play
Now it is done in electronic devices to much dismay

On computer they spend all free time of the day
I wonder what physical strength within them lay

When young we would play in rain
Alongside paper boats would be lain

In vacations we would be out in sun
Playing and enjoying we would have fun

There was no pressure to top, we were a happier lot
Now with egoistic parents kids life is fraught

From playing in mud, rain and sun parents restrain
In their apprehension young kids happiness is slain

In lap of nature children belong
How will such kids become strong?

Every child should at least for 1 hour play
In friends and play joys of childhood lay

Childhood comes once in lifetime
It should be kids most joyous time

All parents should try to ensure that
Everything else is secondary to that.

Date: 10/9/2020
Second place

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Date: 10/25/2020 4:10:00 AM
I agree that there should be a lot of fun time in a child's life. Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/25/2020 4:33:00 AM
Thanks and same to you. Your poem on skipping rope brought back old childhood memories. Thanks for the beautiful write. God bless you. Have a great day ahead. Regards, Rama
Date: 10/21/2020 7:04:00 AM
I agree. Nicely stated and penned Rama. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/21/2020 7:13:00 AM
Thanks and same to you. Have a great day ahead. Take care, Rama
Date: 10/20/2020 3:47:00 PM
A nice descriptive outline of young maturing minds at play, Rama, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/20/2020 9:51:00 PM
Thanks for the placement. Great topic, close to my heart. Enjoyed writing. Have a great day ahead. Take care. Warm regards, Rama

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