Childhood

CHILDHOOD

the one where I
climb a hill
am bit by a dog
i never see or hear

but hereafter every bark
every skittery sound
bites my skin

the one where my feet
happily pump the wind
i sail
over rooftops and trees
   playground in and out
of focus

the one where i remove glasses
everytime my crush
walks past my classroom door
never noticing
but    i       see         everything

the one where the bus bumbles
on rural roads
picking up the scented afternoon
of a petrified skunk

the one where no one is
   home
             and i
remember childhood

9/1/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:51 AM
Yep, those skunks scents never seem to leave the memory. Nevertheless, a great tour of your childhood.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:52 AM
LOL! Thanks, M.L.!
Sands Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Well written details from childhood memories Kim! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Those childhood memories surface every now and then and you wonder where the years went. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:44 AM
True!
Pandit Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Wonderful memories...a pleasant ride to once upon a time! Well done, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Its glimpses and flashes can be quick, poignant grabs, just as the delivery of your mirage remembrances were to me. Nicely done - went straight to my heart. All the best ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Thank you so much, CayCay!
Lawless Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:04 AM
...so many versions of a childhood...that repeated qualifier..."the one where" stitches this together with a thread of "childlike" memory.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Thanks, John!
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