Child of No Father

Child Of No Father.

Down the lane the wind blew into a mist of flame
I reached for hope but all was lost in a flash of flare
I reached for ages, I went for miles, and all I was left with was a cry for help
I watched the world fall down in a grief of pain
Man had taken his last fall; now all that was left were children of no fathers.


The world had set down upon me, and everything fell before me
My distance to the ground was becoming higher and I could no longer reach
The will of man was going to be in ruins and I was the last child standing
I couldn’t find belief but all in vain I cried for help
Man had taken his last fall; now all that was left were children of no fathers.


Man had splintered his home, earthly hopes and dreams of their children
He lived in duplicity in his own nature, owning to his own ruins
The cycle of life was becoming one again; I could smell the fresh air again
Like a new born child, the air felt different and reviving
Man had taken his last fall; but I was no longer a child of no father.

Written by

Terry Curran
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Childhoods End.............profound. Light & love
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April 13, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Congrats Terry on your winning poem in Laura's contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy this special victory...luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S. Linda-Marie..
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April 12, 2010 at 6:37 PM
Terry~ Please go check your soup mail!!!!! Laura
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December 9, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Welcome to the soup....this is a powerful piece you have written here. Vivid imagery makes the reader feel all the emotions that emanate...Superb job! Thanks so much for sharing~Mary
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December 4, 2009 at 9:41 AM
@carol@[email protected] you so much guys for your comments really appreciated,its really personal a well..thank you so much i will be posting more soon.
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December 4, 2009 at 8:20 AM
This poetry quality is very good
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December 1, 2009 at 6:37 AM
Welcome to the Soup, I enjoyed this visionary piece. Well written... RdP
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December 1, 2009 at 4:01 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Terry. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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