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La Divine CD0192 – Miranda Dress Shop

Chiffon

infers rough shell
gestures diaphanous drapes
airy signature form
adopting gown's pardoned trails 

not being flat
introduce informal tryst
secrets adorn front page 
luster affair maneuver
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Somadas Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 9:24 PM
I liked the dense phrasing and unusual word pairings.. Great win Hilo..
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 8:34 PM
Way to go in the contest, Hilo. Great take on chiffon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:10 PM
as light as chiffon itself...loved : diaphanous drapes....a solid contest entry.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 7:03 PM
My wife and sister's favorite came to mind as denim would have been my forté.
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