Chicken Soup For a Recovering Mind

After a brief illness, some dry toast
and the turgid sloshing of rehashed thoughts.

Slowly the former becomes the new now.
I bathe in new invigorating light.

This is how we recreate our world;
with carefully paced electro-chemical reactions,
brittle notions are chewed soft like moccasins
until they fit new feet and legs.

This is how we create a life
no sudden catharsis or evolution,
just one thought hammered to another

until a scaffold is erected,
something that resembles
the bones of a recently absented God.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Mccann Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 4:27 PM
This progresses so well I find it hard to pick a favored line; the entire substance is illuminating and intriguing. Then the use of scaffold is so strong! Elizabeth
Kyser Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 2:43 PM
So who did the absenting? I find I do that myself - "Where did you go?" I ask, knowing I'm the one who has been distant. Good to read, hope you're on the mend!
Ashford Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Hi Jeff, doing fine, this poem was written (badly) last year and so is a major rewrite of that draft. I guess illness disconnects us from our own godhead at times. I think that's what I am trying to say here. Glad the post worked for you. All the best EA.
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