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Chick Flick

as the credits scroll

a bee-line for the toilette

        runny mascara

emotionsromancesenryu

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John Michaels

April 30, 2017 at 4:15 AM

Great write, Paul! Got it in one! Regards, John.

Paul Callus

May 2, 2017 at 12:07 PM

Thank you, John. Regards // paul

Arlene Smith

October 23, 2015 at 2:54 PM

Lol!... Nailed it!!..

Paul Callus

October 23, 2015 at 4:26 PM

Thank you, Arlene! Love the positive reaction:) ~ Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Daver Austin

October 18, 2015 at 11:00 AM

I didn't think of this one as a movie till I read the comments. Charm of it is it can get other meanings. Love, daver

Paul Callus

October 18, 2015 at 1:21 PM

Thank you for stopping by Daver. It is true; readers can come up with different interpretations; that's one positive aspect of poetry. ~ All the best. // paul

Michael Tor

October 17, 2015 at 2:19 AM

Clever Paul a message sent in so few words. Very nice.

Paul Callus

October 17, 2015 at 8:59 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, Michael. Once again, thank you for visiting. Good day. // paul

Casarah Nance

October 16, 2015 at 10:01 PM

lol a good movie will get it every time

Paul Callus

October 17, 2015 at 8:56 AM

I am sure that a good movie deserves a tear or two! A good performance or a great song can produce a similar effect. :) // paul

Laura Leiser

October 16, 2015 at 8:44 PM

Very true, Paul! Loved the message in these simple lines! We gals sometimes just fall to pieces when we watch romantic chick flix :)

Paul Callus

October 17, 2015 at 8:53 AM

Very true, Laura, but there have been times when I was effected, too:) Thank you for a nice visit:) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

October 16, 2015 at 8:35 PM

great job with this senryu and cool picture to go with it.

Paul Callus

October 17, 2015 at 8:49 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Last time we watched a sentimental film at the cinema, this lady walked out at the end, red-eyed and wearing a sheepish smile; that's where the prompt came from. // paul

Tim Smith

October 16, 2015 at 3:34 PM

ah nice one Paul. Glad I don't wear mascara cuz I am known to shed a tear or two.

Paul Callus

October 16, 2015 at 3:44 PM

You're not the only one, Tim! Thank you for stopping by. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

October 16, 2015 at 3:23 PM

How cute and how true! LOL hugs, Connie

Paul Callus

October 16, 2015 at 3:31 PM

Thank you for reading and enjoying, Connie. These types of films are intentionally made for a female audience:) They usually generate interest, money, and tears! Regards ~ paul