Chicago

I like to spend time in Chicago on old Oak Street beach along Lago Michigan. There I can watch girls tan and hear a man talk of his windy city long ago.

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John Smith

Date: 8/1/2011 9:57:00 PM

Hey, I lived in Evanston for a few years; great town. So, if I must explain, it must miss the Mark. Had in mind that if one can't be there, then imagine it: wind blows through 'windy city.' Anyway; a bit obtuse, but thank you for trying to make something of it.

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/1/2011 9:16:00 PM

flew compleatly over my head

John Loving Iii
Date: 8/1/2011 9:19:00 PM

eventhough i lived in evanston.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2011 1:27:00 PM

yes, I can relate to what you feel about Chicago , John