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Chica De Los Suenos

Dream girl dream of life In this deep pale night I open to you my soul I wish to share this mystery called love Imagine a love alive and radiant Larger than life an endless blue sky Blessed would be the earth, the sun the air we breathe All of this just because you are alive All the wounds of past loves would disappear into setting sun We would go much further into this pale night Where the sighs of lovers echoes reverberating around us You the nocturnal flower standing in the shadows I would open sweetly my life to you....

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/21/2013 9:38:00 AM

Hi Ken; This is a beautiful poem, but I thought i was going to read a spanish poem. tell me do you speak spanish? I thank you for reading my poem - Dear Mother. I hope you also read part I. have a nice day...... Lucilla

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/21/2013 10:08:00 AM

Hola Lucilla, Gracias por leer...Yes I do speak some Spanish but I am not completely fluent yet..Thanks for visiting.. Ken...

Danesh Morgan

Date: 7/29/2013 11:55:00 PM

beautiful it is, my friend Ken, you have the touch, thank you so much Ken .

Ken Carroll
Date: 7/30/2013 3:46:00 AM

Thank you Danesh my friend...Good to see you over here as well.. Ken..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2013 8:29:00 PM

wow. now this is called poetry. Kenneth, a gift it would be. (once you share and open up) It's amazing how life falls in and out. and right now echoes surround this poem. the pale night imagery floats with passion. a number one poem in my heart. ... and I love the title. ... ps... im only sneaking on the soup for you right now...hugs. ..linda

Ken Carroll
Date: 7/29/2013 8:51:00 PM

Gracias mi Linda, Happy you liked it..I was hoping you would see it..Wrote it for a special poetess...I'd be most happy to share openly...I'd like to know more about you.. Yours, Ken...