Chess Club


he's holding her hand
cheerleader beyond the glass
his knight takes my queen


02/03/16

lost lovesenryu

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Keith Bickerstaffe

February 23, 2016 at 7:09 PM

Very cleverly done 575 SENRYU... '...his knight takes my queen,' a superb ending line! BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith

James Inman

February 23, 2016 at 8:32 PM

Thank you for the kind comment Keith.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 11, 2016 at 4:59 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write James.

James Inman

February 11, 2016 at 7:51 AM

Thank you.

Susan Gentry

February 11, 2016 at 2:18 AM

Congratulations James on your win with this clever senryu!

James Inman

February 11, 2016 at 7:50 AM

Thank you Susan.

Jan Allison

February 10, 2016 at 2:21 PM

congrats on your win James:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman

February 10, 2016 at 2:48 PM

Thanks Jan.

Poet Destroyer A

February 10, 2016 at 10:04 AM

Thanks for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

February 10, 2016 at 8:27 AM

James, congratulations on your Let's Hear It win. LINDA

James Inman

February 10, 2016 at 10:02 AM

Hi PD, thank you.

Pashang Salehi

February 8, 2016 at 12:09 AM

Losing your queen....Checkmate...

James Inman

February 8, 2016 at 6:49 AM

Thanks for the visit, Pashang.

Poet Destroyer A

February 6, 2016 at 9:23 PM

:) LINDA

Connie Marcum Wong

February 6, 2016 at 7:39 PM

Wow is this ever clever James! Take a bow my friend! Bravo! #7 a Fave!

James Inman

February 7, 2016 at 12:16 AM

Thank you Connie, what a sweet comment

Poet Destroyer A

February 3, 2016 at 10:33 PM

James, thank you for the kind reply. Thanks for liking my new smile. LINDA

James Inman

February 4, 2016 at 9:51 AM

Always, PD.

Andrea Dietrich

February 3, 2016 at 9:17 PM

oh, I love how you did this. But I have to warn you. I once did a tanka that I though was quite good for one of Judy's contests like this one and she she left me off her winners' list for "not working hard" (hope it does not happen to you, my friend)

James Inman

February 4, 2016 at 10:12 AM

Thanks Andrea, what will be will be.