Sotto Poet Poet Etheree

Cherry Mirth

Written: June 02, 2024 For Tania Kitchin Contest

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I'm
At ease
fortunate
frolicking balls
no need to be scared
drive the life thoroughfare
with each fact stacking in grace
surely, don't run insane or wound
rivet mirth and carry the waves peak
 dear friends who just invigorate my life.

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Tania Kitchin June 9, 2024 at 4:47 PM Lasaad, wonderfully creative, congratulations on your winning placement!

Tonye George June 8, 2024 at 8:13 AM Lovely written Dear Sotto. Good luck in the contest.

Duke Beaufort June 4, 2024 at 6:01 AM SP, you have made a spectacular celebration of great ideas and a code of good behavior as well. I really like how you can summarize what is important to us all.

Jay Narain June 3, 2024 at 11:28 AM Enjoyed your creative Ehteree. Best of luck in contest.

Daniel Henry Rodgers June 3, 2024 at 9:52 AM Hey Sotto, a delightful celebration of living life to the fullest! I just love your playful wordplay and upbeat rhythm which radiates so much joy and contentment. You have a wonderful talent for infusing positivity into your verses. Keep spreading that infectious energy! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Howard Kerr June 3, 2024 at 9:18 AM Dear Sotto, This Etheree encapsulates so much in an economy of clearly delineated lines. Each word is of enormous assistance in a narrative that resonates with those who value deep connections with others. Your work validates such a process which is paramount to human wellness. Good luck with this. Your reflections on “I’d Actually Forgotten” go down well with me Howard

Sara Kendrick June 3, 2024 at 4:39 AM Creative lines in this Etheree. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara K

Arthur Vaso June 3, 2024 at 1:15 AM Enjoyed this read, you are such a diverse poet.

Yann Rolland June 3, 2024 at 12:14 AM remarkable tribute, preciuos words to sahre, i loved the form ( calligrammes in french) take care poet