Cherry Blossoms

Like a robin, beyond the horizon you flew,
Leaving me lonesome in the state of blue.
Now how would I find you, where would I go?
Sans you the glory of my heart is getting low.

Your loving memories will always make me weep;
Have you forgotten the promise I had told you to keep.
The promise to glance as one beyond the stars;
To make a new land free from all cruelty and wars.

You’re my true love, not a dull game.
Don't you know that you’re my only flame, 
Who had showed me the way towards the fairy land.
Darling, I just want to hold again your hand.

I can't forget those moments spent under the silvery moon.
Darling, I'm waiting for you, please come back soon.
I believe we’ll watch the cherry blossoms fall again;
We’ll again run up to the hill, to our secret domain.
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Contest - Tell me a story Poetry Contest
Sponsored by - Brenda Chiri

Date - 10/1/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 1:03 PM
This is a beautiful love poem you have written. yes love poem, this is how i see this poetry. have a nice day my friend. Lucky girl.
Haikutwinkle Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 8:40 AM
well written ;)
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 4:43 AM
- A wonderful and touching write, Augustus - I will give you a 7 for this one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:00 PM
You did a great job with this one. Makes me wish I could see that movie!! This is one I want to write for too. Thanks for your lovely comments. I am deliberately not seeing the Andrea poems. Will wait to see them all at once! (and hoping to see the ones who captured my essence!!)
Black Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 11:46 PM
Thanks a lot. Yaa that movie is very nice sad story.
Nusker Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 12:12 AM
Such a lovely poem. It tells all about the move. I haven't seen it but after reading your poem now I certainly want to watch it. Congrats on your win, Augustus.
Black Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 3:40 PM
oh, Afzal Yaa, why not, hope you will also like the Movie. I like the fact that you made your mind to watch that movie after reading my poem. Wow... enjoy life.... Afzal. Thank you very much.
Arnone Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 10:28 PM
A film to be watched late at night when subtitles work best. A sad, touching story; but, your poem makes it brighter! Congrats, Augustus. :-)
Black Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Thanks a lot, Sir. Yaa... It's a very touching movie in my view.
Black Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 9:08 PM
I just can't believe this I got Second place. I just love this site. Oh, I am very very excited.... I had never thought I will get second. 5 Centimeters per second is really a great movie. Every people should watch that movie.
Gupta Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 5:20 AM
A nice poem ...
Black Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 6:12 AM
Thanks a lot. Sir
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