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Trudy Diane Rider

Cherry Blossoms

Tiny white petals
soft winds combing tangled limbs
      looks like falling snow

Copyright © Trudy Diane Rider | Year Posted 2008

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Suzanne Delaney

August 31, 2016 at 2:42 PM

Congratulations on this pretty haiku being featured . I have faved it. SuZ

August 28, 2016 at 8:45 PM

Beautiful!

June 24, 2009 at 11:54 PM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Trudy.Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

June 24, 2009 at 9:00 PM

I like the vulnerability of this cool haiku! Trudy! nice win!!! jim

Carrie Richards

June 24, 2009 at 5:28 PM

Lovely haiku, and wonderful winning poem, Trudy. Congratulations!~Carrie

Barbara Gorelick

June 24, 2009 at 3:26 PM

Great haiku Trudy..I love the second line. Congrats on your win. BG

June 24, 2009 at 2:41 PM

Trudy, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

September 22, 2008 at 4:42 PM

Very lovely Haiku Laura :)

September 19, 2008 at 2:48 PM

Beautiful images paint a picture with words in this poem. I really like the second line. Nice use of personification. Thank you for sharing this well-written piece with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Kristin Reynolds

September 19, 2008 at 6:09 AM

My favorites, I've also written of their charm, lovely, Kristin

September 19, 2008 at 5:35 AM

Yes, the imagery of cherry blossoms as falling snow is glorious! Wonderful haiku. Love, Shar

September 19, 2008 at 3:52 AM

Lovely, like it much :) Teri

September 18, 2008 at 9:59 PM

This is so beautiful, lovely images. Love Chitra

Valerie Bellefleur

September 18, 2008 at 5:54 PM

Just love blossoms - and this is great imagery..

Carrie Richards

September 18, 2008 at 5:51 PM

A lovely image...sweet poem!

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