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Cherry Blossom

Tiny pink flowers hanami* for all insects .... bouquet of senses * japanese for the age old practice of picnicking under the ume (cherry blossom tree)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2013 2:27:00 PM

Once i knew the meaning you gave us, I really enjoyed this one. Very inventive. One of the best for her contest, Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/9/2013 2:45:00 PM

thank you Andrea, praise from you on a Haiku is praise indeed...Seren

Donna Jones

Date: 4/8/2013 5:34:00 PM

This poem is as lovely as you Seren ....

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/8/2013 6:26:00 PM

Awe thats nice of you Donna but i just remembered i wrote about insects tooo lol ...Seren

Len Gasun

Date: 4/8/2013 9:06:00 AM

I can imagine the very wonderful image in your poem my dear friend Seren. I love every line especially the last one. A brilliant write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing and also for my awesome placement in your contest. I'm so honored and grateful. Have a great and grace-filled weekend! love lots, Leonora

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/8/2013 8:02:00 AM

Excellent job here! "Bouquet of senses", I'm all for that.

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/8/2013 8:31:00 AM

Thank you Drake, for commenting and stopping by?..Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/8/2013 7:54:00 AM

You are good at this form. Thanks for hosting a great contest and for choosing my poem.

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/8/2013 8:32:00 AM

Lol no Richard I am not, I agonise over it,then keep fingers crossed....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/8/2013 5:41:00 AM

Wow, I am quite impressed with your knowledge my friend! I have never heard of hanami before! Your skillful writing is done very exquisitely Seren! My favorite line however, has to be the last one, "bouquet of senses" this says a lot in such a short line! I loved your poem here, you have done masterfully with this piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/8/2013 8:33:00 AM

Thanks Russell...Seren