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Cherry Blood Red

Fleshy; juicy; luring cherry, blood-red Stone within it, though hard, never does hurt Kids to toothless old goes chewing ahead Adding with fruits and salads as dessert Stone within it, though hard, never does hurt Heart-shaped; looks as though bleeding endlessly Adding with fruits and salads as dessert One could go on eating it zealously Heart-shaped; looks as though bleeding endlessly Kids to toothless old goes chewing ahead One could go on eating it zealously Fleshy; juicy; luring cherry, blood-red 27 August 2022

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 8/31/2022 3:01:00 PM

Sounds delicious. I enjoyed your emphasis on the blood-red color.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/28/2022 11:44:00 PM

Excellent and Interesting poetry, love the form. Christuraj

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2022 8:15:00 AM

I like this pantoum and the topic within its lines. Way to go. I wonder if it is cherry season somewhere in the world. Sara