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Cherokee Rose

many days we walked an unforgiving sun beating down upon us and at night even the cold moon seemed to curse us... Seeing what no eye should see our tears mingled with dust and angry winds spoke of the death of our people our children, our old succumbing to grief... Our hearts cried out Great Spirit, give strength give courage to your people let not this trail of tears be the end of our great nation let this not, be our defeat... The Great Spirit heard the anguish of his people and said I will send them as a sign an indestructible flower which has both strength and beauty a symbol of my love for them... As dawn awoke we turned our faces east longing to see our ancestral home to savour the richness of our heritage as it was before the fathers of greed stole it... But what we saw was amazing the trail we'd watered with tears was alive and growing... A white flower as pure as fresh snow within its center gleaming gold a lovely flower surrounded by seven green leaves and armed with sharp thorns the Cherokee rose...

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Date: 1/17/2020 4:54:00 PM
A poignant and powerful poem, Running Wolves.
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Date: 1/17/2020 5:08:00 PM
thank you, you are to kind
Date: 1/15/2020 9:44:00 PM
Beautiful prose... Frankii
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Date: 1/15/2020 10:09:00 PM
Thank you very kindly
Date: 12/19/2019 8:57:00 PM
Does suffering always lead to redemption & beauty? You seem to make it so. Beautiful, Wolf.
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Date: 12/20/2019 6:26:00 AM
Suffering may cause some to find redemption, but most develope a dark sense of humor and unhealthy coping skills...
Date: 12/19/2019 7:40:00 AM
Beautifully done! So proud and purposeful!
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Date: 12/9/2019 7:47:00 PM
wow...this was beautiful and well crafted... the ending was perfect for this piece...wonderful penning Robert :) though not cherokee my oldest grandson is part native american indian, his grandfather grew up on a reservation...i have always been intrigued by the native american indians... hugs
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/9/2019 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so very very kindly. I truly appreciate your words and time. Hugs
Date: 12/9/2019 2:57:00 PM
wow,Robert. I wrote of the Cherokee a long time ago, a very wordy "free" verse,which I considered more as prose.Anyway, I like how you went beyond just describing the trail but turned it into a special tribute using the symbol of the lovely white flower. Awesome.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/9/2019 4:03:00 PM
Thank you very kindly. Your words, your opinions are always uplifting and encouraging, and definitely welcome, lol. My mother's father is Cherokee, my father's mother is Apache, as for me I got the butt-end of the gene pool and look nothing like them, lol. One day I'm going to sit down and try to research the family history
Date: 12/9/2019 2:57:00 PM
I am supposedly a little bit Cherokee on my dad's side, but one of my sisters did a DNA test and it did not come up!!(though I do have a cherokee looking nose)
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Date: 12/9/2019 9:46:00 AM
Cherokee rose sounds insightful and delightful Robert. Is she a kind of cactus?
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/9/2019 10:33:00 AM
the Cherokee Rose is a wild rose with a heartbreaking back story on one hand and a symbol of love and hope on the other.

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