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Cherished Moments

Glimpses worth delight. Ground is writhing and spinning. We spin in clusters. Heart thumping and gaze dazzling. We liked to waltz once were young.
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Skelly Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 8:01 AM
A lovely image accompanies this tanka, so uplifting...Delice
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 6:56 AM
Much joy emanates from your poem, Lasaad.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 1:57 AM
I see you are fascinated with Holland's floral treasure which I was fortunate to visit twice.
Hankins Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Wonderful thoughts went through my head as I read your poem, Lasaad. I love the illustration, too.
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