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Glimpses worth delight. Ground is writhing and spinning. We spin in clusters. Heart thumping and gaze dazzling. We liked to waltz once were young.

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Date: 12/6/2021 8:01:00 AM
A lovely image accompanies this tanka, so uplifting...Delice
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Date: 12/6/2021 6:56:00 AM
Much joy emanates from your poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/6/2021 1:57:00 AM
I see you are fascinated with Holland's floral treasure which I was fortunate to visit twice.
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Date: 12/5/2021 12:19:00 PM
Wonderful thoughts went through my head as I read your poem, Lasaad. I love the illustration, too.
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