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Chemistry Pleiades

Capricious, a long haired 
Classical girl, long legs
Casually looks, eye
Contact, fiery young man,
Clearly hormones aflame,
Confidently walks with rose 
Converse, fait accompli!


Entering Poem : Pleiades Poetry Contest
Sponsored By Joseph May
2020/10/02

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Jack Horne

October 25, 2020 at 11:55 AM

you described this scenario so well

Jennifer Proxenos

October 28, 2020 at 5:54 AM

Thank-you Jack, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, unfortunately my entry I sent in a few days ago for Joseph's new contest I withdrew on my own accord, as I hadn't read the rules carefully, I misread them. But I still left the poem in otherwise I would have lost my comments. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Hugs and blessings,

M. L. Kiser

October 24, 2020 at 10:03 PM

Very nice, good luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith

October 12, 2020 at 12:20 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love what you did with this theme. Your pen went outside the box. Enjoy your win.............

Jennifer Proxenos

October 20, 2020 at 9:45 AM

Thank-you Paula for a super comment, - I am still catching up with replies to my comments, I haven't forgotten you, will be visiting soon. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Jan Allison

October 12, 2020 at 11:15 AM

what a super take on the chemistry theme!many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

October 20, 2020 at 9:43 AM

Hi Jan, thank you for an awesome comment, I have always been a bit arty farty, so Chemistry and Science wouldn't have worked for me my friend. Thought of love and what it does to our hormones! hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May

October 11, 2020 at 4:43 PM

The chemistry of love, Wonderful write Jennifer, Congrats on your win..

Jennifer Proxenos

October 20, 2020 at 9:40 AM

Thank-you for a affording me a place in your contest Joseph - I had fun writing it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2020 at 2:08 PM

ooh la la. GREAT way to do the theme. Yours is one of my favorites in that catergory!! Congrats in the contest

Jennifer Proxenos

October 20, 2020 at 9:38 AM

Thank-you Andrea, I thought Science and I never agree, so turned it to humanity! Glad you enjoyed it, Do you live in America Andrea? Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

John Watt

October 4, 2020 at 11:02 PM

Oh this is ingenious, Jenn, to take the chemistry theme as 'boy meets girl', I LOVE it! "Fait accompli", the lucky man! I smell a winner! Best wishes in the contest , and take good care, my friend ~ John

Jennifer Proxenos

October 7, 2020 at 12:16 PM

Hi John, oh so pleased you like it, hopeless at Science but human science I could cope with. Yours is an excellent entry too my friend. Joseph always has such fun contests. Watched Joe Biden talk to America last night, gosh I'm worried about all my friends there, what has Trump done! God Bless and hugs, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

October 4, 2020 at 4:41 PM

Very descriptive and expressive work. It must teens or young adults. LOL..Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

October 7, 2020 at 12:11 PM

It is my greatest pleasure, your poems are such a delight to read, you are one very talented lady, a great poetess Sara! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Running Wolves

October 3, 2020 at 10:16 PM

Oh that first chance to meet someone is always nerve wracking. Well done

Jennifer Proxenos

October 7, 2020 at 12:10 PM

Yes it sure is, but there is such a thing as love at first sight - it is the most amazing feeling. Thank-you RW, its lovely to have you visit my page., Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Silent One

October 3, 2020 at 10:10 AM

You did this form very well...I think I did it once a long long time ago .

Jennifer Proxenos

October 7, 2020 at 11:09 AM

Thank-you Silent One , it was my first a ttempt at this form of poetry and quite a challenge. Hugs and blessings my friend, Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham

October 2, 2020 at 7:39 PM

Well written Jennifer. Love your take on the theme. Good luck in the contest Tom

Jennifer Proxenos

October 7, 2020 at 11:08 AM

Thank-you Tom, Science was never my strong subject so I adapted it to Human Chemistry! Blessings, my friend, Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie

October 2, 2020 at 6:52 PM

Hello Jennifer … I’ve never heard of this genre but it’s certainly interesting. Good luck Jennifer - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos

October 7, 2020 at 11:06 AM

Thank-you Lindsay, it is the first time I have tried it, but in for a penny, in for a pound. Really enjoyed doing it and quite a challenge! Thank you for your wishes my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.