Krish Radhakrishna Poet Pleiades

Chemistry Pleiades

Chemical reaction,
called flammable young love,
caused from a distant view,
can set two hearts ablaze,
circle of smoke unseen,
chapter of bond begins,
creates cute child compound!

Pleiades poetry contest
1St Placement
Joseph May sponsored,
Written 01/Oct/2020

first word begins with letter ‘C’ as does the title
6 syllables each line
7 lines

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Jan Allison October 12, 2020 at 6:51 AM oh that last line is superb - great chemistry indeed:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Krish Radhakrishna October 12, 2020 at 7:52 AM Thanks Jan!! Appreciate your kind words!

Kim Rodrigues October 12, 2020 at 5:21 AM Indeed Chemistry, Krish! Congratulations! Krish Radhakrishna October 12, 2020 at 7:53 AM Thanks Kim, Thanks Very much!!

Joseph May October 11, 2020 at 4:29 PM Heating up the Bunsen burner to "set hearts ablaze". Very nicely done Krish, Congrats on your win Krish Radhakrishna October 11, 2020 at 9:47 PM Thanks Joseph for this lovely contest and such a variety of poems that it has generated. BW krish

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2020 at 2:01 PM oh now THAT kind of chemistry I really like hearing about. Congrats . Krish Radhakrishna October 11, 2020 at 2:43 PM Thanks Andrea! The most significant reactions we know in our lives!

Regina Mcintosh October 1, 2020 at 3:21 AM A wonderful entry. This is a difficult contest with the rules... I hope I can think of something. God bless you and happy writing :) Krish Radhakrishna October 1, 2020 at 9:16 AM Thanks Regina! I am sure you will find the inspiration and the idea! god bless and good wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2020 at 2:45 AM - :) ... love the last line ... always let the flames burn :) - Best wishes in the contest, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Krish Radhakrishna October 1, 2020 at 9:14 AM Thanks Anne Lise! Hope Joseph May likes it!