Cheesy Onion Soup

One day I had a craving
For a bowl of onion soup
I opened a can -and found 
            it to be plain
So i decided what needed
What I had to do

I cut bread into cubes
Put them into My bowl
Added cheese pieces
Then heated the soup
On the stove burner

When the soup was ready
I poured into my bowl
Then added cheese on top
Watch the cheese melting
Then ate slowly to enjoy it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Perrin Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Nice poem and now you’ve made me hungry :-) x
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 11:58 AM
Hello Elaine,did you have lunch today yet? I like this soup I order it every chance I get. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend. x
Deschler Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:58 PM
Sounds so good Darlene... I like how this poem tantalizes the senses with its vivid imagery... Keep up the great work, my friend!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Hello Kelly, thank you so much Kelly. Have a nice evening my friend.
Michael Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Well done...Love the flow...
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 6:21 PM
Hello Arturo Micheal, this theme was on my mind for a long time , so i wrote about it. have a nice evening my friend.Thank you for the lovely comment.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 4:00 AM
I do not think I have had onion soup since the 90's. Now I am wanting it, but not without cheese of course! It is savoring it by eating it slowly that will get me. We usually have about 25 minutes for lunch so teachers are gobblers. I am not an exception.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Hello Caren, Cheesy onion soup must eaten slowly. The melted cheese makes you eat it slowly. I live it. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Proxenos Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 2:22 AM
Hi Darlene, a nice simple meal is better than a gourmet dinner some time, you made it sound so nice, I could taste it! Hugs, Jennifer.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 10:19 AM
Hello Jennifer,I sense that you would enjoy a bowl of this cheesy onion soup. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.
Joshua Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Hi, it's Joshua. Just wanted to say... "It's my birthday "
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:55 AM
It is so nice to meet you. Have a Happy day.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:44 AM
Hello Adevemi Joshua, I would like to wish you a happy birthday. After all it is a special day to celebrate. So enjoy your day. have fun. All the best Darlene
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Just proves...everything is better with cheese. A yummy poem!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:46 AM
Hello Andrea, yes everything is better with cheese. It is yummy. have a nice day my friend.Thank you for the lovely comment.
Warrior Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 9:30 AM
I love onion soup Darlene...perhaps we could share some one day...lovely verse my friend...^WW^
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 5:03 PM
Hello Winged Warrior, I would like very much to share a bowl of onion soup with you. Thank you for the lovely comment.Have a lovely evening my friend.
Lee Sr. Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 8:36 PM
Why? you wanna make all these wonderful Soupers hungry, and for Soup at that LOL!! hungry lovely write Write on James
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Hello James ,because it is soup. Are you Hungry? Thank you for the lovely comment. Have nice day my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 5:28 PM
I'm a lover of really strong cheese Darlene, use that and ill join you in a bowl or two lol. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Hello Tom, oh! I like to try different type of cheese. Why not? Sure! Have a nice day my friend.
Cholt Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Quite partial to a bowl of soup, particularly during the winter months. Nicely done.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 6:56 AM
Hello W. A. Choly I have soup all year round i add different things to it for a different taste. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend..
Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 5:31 PM
i'm a soup lover and your delicious piece makes me want to try this recipe, darlene... lovely!...huggs
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 5:41 PM
Hello Nette Onclaud, I did it on top of the stove. but tje real way to do it, is in the oven. The cheese comes out cheesy. i love it. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.
Horsman Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 3:26 PM
love your innovation, and your poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Hello Harry, thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 2:20 PM
Yummy. :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 2:46 PM
hello Maureen, yes yummy! i like this type of soup. have a nice day my friend.
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 1:25 PM
mmm sounds tasty but I am not a fan of onion soup lol I love making soup and cheese can always be a welcome addition to zhuz it up and be more tasty:-) hugs Jan xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Hello Jan Allison, It is tasty.I use cheese for grilled cheese sandwich and cheese scrambled eggs. I love cheese. Have a nice day my friend.
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