Cheery Joy

Here is my thought on numerical evolution of Etheree poem form:

One, 
Two, three
Four, five, six
Seven, eight, nine
Ten, eleven, twelve
Thirteen, forteen, fifteen
Sixteen, seventeen, eighteen
Nineteen, a twenty, a teentyone
twentytwo, twentythee. twentyfour
Twentyfive, twentysix, twentyseven

Here is an attempted poem:

Joy
brings smiles
cheer to face
on thrill of win.
On hearing laughter
from the voices of kids
evokes bliss in my spirits
contentment fills my  hungry soul.
Happiness raeches an ecstasy,
I feel blessed with delight and elan.
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Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 10:41 PM
I liked how you wrote about joy. And the word elan was cool to use. It's rare to see it used
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 4:15 PM
Nice!
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