Cheers
I finally understand dry mouth
Now that I’m running a race
Like a dog with its tongue hanging out
I’m panting to keep the pace
I feel like a Black-eyed Susan,
Wilting and bowed in a drought
I think I’m suffering from delusions -
I just saw Elvis in a cloud!
It doesn’t sound too strange, I know
But I swear he was cheering for me
Rocking his pelvis to and fro,
Screaming to take the lead
I run into hands pushing H2O
And chug the water like shots
The icy cold refreshment flows
Into me, clearing eye spots
I throw down the empty water cups
And now see Elvis crystal clear
Only it’s not Elvis; it’s me mum,
Drunk and flashing her rear!
I ignore me mum and the jeers
As I speed through the finish line
Then join the others with a “cheers”
An H20 high five!
9/27/11
Received 10th place in "Flowing Water" contest
Copyright © Black Eyed Susan | Year Posted 2011
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