Cheerful Feet Imprinted On Grass

Through the valleys cheerful feet imprinted on grass
laughter ticking the winds we lay on pillows made of
roses cozy in the charm of your gentle arms souls 
drifting along with heavenly winds resting beyond
the gates of cherished grounds,coiled in the soil
of my soul growing and flowing in the unseen parts 
of me, your sent lingers in my every breath a pair of 
dolphins spring in the air to flaunt the love above with 
the graceful touch of a dove the apparent togetherness
in love your still with me even when you say good bye,


within my mind we fly high in the open sky your love 
I will over supply your love I will never deny so those 
other females can try but there lending hand I will deny 
a love such as yours oft dose no come by I am I you're forever 
the apple of my eye,why go away to gaze in to another eye
forever with you I fly, the world will see our love with 
mental eyes and say I wish I, our reply is goodbye as we
fly by off to heaven,we shrink to enjoy natures gifts,off


to a capturing trance on rose peddles of bliss we dance ,
then off to the refreshing hibiscus where we kiss,linked 
by breath linked until death, my beloved,my completion,
my all, my only,completion,if it was my last bread I would
laugh and split it in half and share with you my last as we
tap our wine glass then sip and laugh, through the struggle
and through the pain your love to me is always the same,
in my heart you remain, connected heart beats continuing 
after death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/15/2012 12:04:00 AM
Absolutely Fabulous! Elliott, this is an awsome write! Well Done, dear one...full of passions and imagery! I love it !! big hugs, love ya , deb
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Date: 5/14/2012 4:19:00 PM
Wow... this is great Elliot..very lovely ....smiles....chiquita
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:57:00 AM
great write Elliott!
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:08:00 AM
My hat is off to you Elliott!!! I see you arranged it differently this time..love your work!!!
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Date: 5/14/2012 1:41:00 AM
seems you did this with such spontaneity that the far corners of your heart were tapped, elliot... beautifully rendered!..:) huggs!
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:04:00 PM
wowowow. this is my favorite of yours I've seen so far. Just love the beautiful romantic lines and they have a lyrical quality although free verse!!
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