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Check With Jack

If you're having a bad day Check in with Jack Things not going your way Check in with Jack If your life's filled with gloom Check in with Jack If your heart's filled with doom Check in with Jack If your life's in the dumper Check in with Jack If each day's a bummer Check in with Jack Can you see a real pattern Developing here Did you check in with Jack To allay all your fears There's no one to blame But yourself I say Not following my advice You'll get lost in the fray CHECK IN WITH JACK!!! © Jack Ellison 2013

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Poet Tacito

Date: 9/27/2013 9:20:00 AM

I can see you standing behind a wooden booth like Lucy from the Peanuts cartoon. The sign would read: "Jack the Psychiatrist. 5 cents per minute." Love this!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/28/2013 6:01:00 PM

You crack me up, my good friend Drake! So I see you're a "Peanuts lover too! LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/27/2013 7:36:00 AM

Talk about dumpsters! Hubby took Dragon with him dumpster diving. They get really crazy and intense in the dumpsters behind the art store... Talk about goodies! Unfortunately they bring them all home... Dragon's making a colleage on his cave wall... Mini sculpters of his penguins, and the weird frogs. And I even think there's one of you Jack... What! None of me? Go Figure! Sigh!...

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/28/2013 6:00:00 PM

OKAY! You gotta let me see the sculpture he did of me! LOL Hugs, Jacko! xoxox

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/26/2013 5:18:00 PM

Just checking in. You know what - the whole world is wrong, but you R. alright. ... Lucilla

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/26/2013 6:39:00 PM

Love your reply my dear Lucilla!!! LOL Sending sweet thoughts of love your way... xoxoxoxox