Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Check With Jack

If you're having a bad day
Check in with Jack
Things not going your way
Check in with Jack

If your life's filled with gloom
Check in with Jack
If your heart's filled with doom
Check in with Jack

If your life's in the dumper
Check in with Jack
If each day's a bummer
Check in with Jack

Can you see a real pattern
Developing here
Did you check in with Jack
To allay all your fears

There's no one to blame
But yourself I say
Not following my advice
You'll get lost in the fray

CHECK IN WITH JACK!!!

© Jack Ellison 2013

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Poet Tacito September 27, 2013 at 9:20 AM I can see you standing behind a wooden booth like Lucy from the Peanuts cartoon. The sign would read: "Jack the Psychiatrist. 5 cents per minute." Love this! Jack Ellison September 28, 2013 at 6:01 PM You crack me up, my good friend Drake! So I see you're a "Peanuts lover too! LOL

Carol Eastman September 27, 2013 at 7:36 AM Talk about dumpsters! Hubby took Dragon with him dumpster diving. They get really crazy and intense in the dumpsters behind the art store... Talk about goodies! Unfortunately they bring them all home... Dragon's making a colleage on his cave wall... Mini sculpters of his penguins, and the weird frogs. And I even think there's one of you Jack... What! None of me? Go Figure! Sigh!... Jack Ellison September 28, 2013 at 6:00 PM OKAY! You gotta let me see the sculpture he did of me! LOL Hugs, Jacko! xoxox

Lucilla Carrillo September 26, 2013 at 5:18 PM Just checking in. You know what - the whole world is wrong, but you R. alright. ... Lucilla Jack Ellison September 26, 2013 at 6:39 PM Love your reply my dear Lucilla!!! LOL Sending sweet thoughts of love your way... xoxoxoxox