Check Once, Check Noose

Just know there's someone out there 
Who sees past all your demons
The ones who hope for leaving
your remorseful feelings 
Dealing with that cold breath 
From that dragon who's breathing, on you
Hangin' from the ceiling, like a neck
Check once, check noose
Loosen it, keep yourself from losin' it
Get some fusion with fusin' the juices 
Rebootin' the lucrative 
Who wouldve assumed accusations 
Accusing doom when relating 
To shoes on the pavement
Making your way to digging your grave
In vein, blood rains with pain
The memories, everything 
I would severely sever 
After all I am the devil then
The master but if god is a disaster
My brain is hurricane-like, so sea whole the factor 
Of fear, love, ache, enduring some rage
Anger, some days but some they sum great
For ones made for danger
The ones who shock watts out of tazers 
Hop scotch from the lasers
And play jump rope with a rough rotation
But before ya turn to saying you're an eight feet
Hole buried 18, won crazy
Ate the eighteen sayings spoken over lately
Dosing off in the distance
We are here to listen to the kids 
In fear of itchin' the skin again
To feel less real
reality check once
check noose still
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 15, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Tyler :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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January 26, 2015 at 12:52 PM
- A warm welcome to the P Soup, Tyler :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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January 25, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Tyler, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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January 24, 2015 at 6:06 AM
Tyler,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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