Jack Horne Poet Tail-rhyme

Cheater

It only took a single glance;
A slave to lust’s hypnotic trance,
He lost his head.

He begged her for a second chance,
And tried to save the doomed romance;
Her love was dead.

5th May for Susan’s Tail Rhyme contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 17, 2012 at 1:51 PM A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi May 15, 2012 at 6:25 PM awwww...Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi May 15, 2012 at 6:25 PM awwww...Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Nette Onclaud May 15, 2012 at 5:00 AM suoer congrats on your win, jack!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2012 at 8:30 PM yep, it works! Now I will test it just going away from your page instead of clicking on reverse and see if it still is posted when I come back to it!

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2012 at 8:29 PM Yours was one of my favorites! Big congrats. I may have figured out the trick to making this not post double. When it does not post, I just click on the arrow to go backward, and then I come back and see it is posted. I am going to check it now.

Barbara Gorelick May 14, 2012 at 7:55 PM Served him right! lol...good one Jack..congrats...BG

Ralph Taylor May 14, 2012 at 6:11 PM Congrats on your win, Jack. Outstanding. Nice going. Ralph

Olusegun Arowolo May 14, 2012 at 5:26 PM Awesome and wonderful piece,Jack....Congrats on your win in this contest....

Olusegun Arowolo May 14, 2012 at 5:25 PM Awesome and wonderful piece,Jack....Congrats on your win in this contest....

Sara Kendrick May 14, 2012 at 3:42 PM Great work..Super congrats..Sara

Debra Squyres May 14, 2012 at 2:38 PM Sadly...true so often ....those glances that lead to lust trances... Congrats on your winning place in the contest !!

Carrie Richards May 14, 2012 at 2:00 PM Hope he learned his lesson!! Great poem, Jack....and there is a moral to the story as well! Congratulations!

David Williams May 14, 2012 at 11:19 AM jack congrats on your win..David

Kash Poet May 14, 2012 at 11:19 AM Well done jack!Congrats on your win!!

Deborah Burch May 14, 2012 at 11:00 AM Ooooo...good one...Big Congrats on your win Jack!!! Well Done...big hugs, love ya deb

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 14, 2012 at 10:42 AM Congrats on your win Jack xx

Terry O'Leary May 14, 2012 at 10:05 AM Potent... Terry

Sara Kendrick May 6, 2012 at 4:56 PM Good work..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sara Sara Kendrick May 6, 2012 at 4:57 PM This one has good rhyme and flow to it.. Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2012 at 9:02 PM oops, I almost clicked on your trochee. hahaha Lucky for me, I have a short memory! thanks for all the comments today, Jack. I really like your cheater poem here. I hope susan does too!

Deb Wilson May 5, 2012 at 7:57 PM this is good..it really hit home with me..love,Deb

Deborah Burch May 5, 2012 at 4:56 PM Clever Tale Jack...:) nicely done....good luck in the contest!! big hugs, love deb