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Cheater

It only took a single glance; A slave to lust’s hypnotic trance, He lost his head. He begged her for a second chance, And tried to save the doomed romance; Her love was dead. 5th May for Susan’s Tail Rhyme contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/17/2012 1:51:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2012 6:25:00 PM
awwww...Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 5/15/2012 6:25:00 PM
awwww...Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 5/15/2012 5:00:00 AM
suoer congrats on your win, jack!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:30:00 PM
yep, it works! Now I will test it just going away from your page instead of clicking on reverse and see if it still is posted when I come back to it!
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:29:00 PM
Yours was one of my favorites! Big congrats. I may have figured out the trick to making this not post double. When it does not post, I just click on the arrow to go backward, and then I come back and see it is posted. I am going to check it now.
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:55:00 PM
Served him right! lol...good one Jack..congrats...BG
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jack. Outstanding. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/14/2012 5:26:00 PM
Awesome and wonderful piece,Jack....Congrats on your win in this contest....
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Date: 5/14/2012 5:25:00 PM
Awesome and wonderful piece,Jack....Congrats on your win in this contest....
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Date: 5/14/2012 3:42:00 PM
Great work..Super congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2012 2:38:00 PM
Sadly...true so often ....those glances that lead to lust trances... Congrats on your winning place in the contest !!
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Date: 5/14/2012 2:00:00 PM
Hope he learned his lesson!! Great poem, Jack....and there is a moral to the story as well! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:19:00 AM
jack congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:19:00 AM
Well done jack!Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:00:00 AM
Ooooo...good one...Big Congrats on your win Jack!!! Well Done...big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jack xx
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:05:00 AM
Potent... Terry
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Date: 5/6/2012 4:56:00 PM
Good work..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/6/2012 4:57:00 PM
This one has good rhyme and flow to it.. Sara
Date: 5/5/2012 9:02:00 PM
oops, I almost clicked on your trochee. hahaha Lucky for me, I have a short memory! thanks for all the comments today, Jack. I really like your cheater poem here. I hope susan does too!
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Date: 5/5/2012 7:57:00 PM
this is good..it really hit home with me..love,Deb
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Date: 5/5/2012 4:56:00 PM
Clever Tale Jack...:) nicely done....good luck in the contest!! big hugs, love deb
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