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Cheated On and Lied To

I've been cheated on and lied to yet I still go back for more. You don't understand my feelings yet I can't walk out the door. Your talk is so convincing you say everything's alright. I turn around to leave you and I finally see the light. You'll never really be mine you still want to be free. I guess I finally realized you'll never love just me.

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/17/2017 2:24:00 PM

A vey sad but beautifully written poem, remember in life you ll found happiness but their also be dark, the world is very cruel, they attack on your weaknesses, try to be strong infront of them, never give them any reason to hurt you, never depend on anyone, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Lilly Davis

Date: 11/3/2016 12:20:00 PM

This is my life :( Screw you Natalie

Patricia Lawton

Date: 10/21/2016 6:13:00 AM

Monica there are many who will connect to this verse. beautifully written. hugs and more hugs. x

Keith Osborne

Date: 10/14/2016 7:12:00 PM

So, would you like a non-computer generated comment on this piece of art? Painstakingly true, unfortunately, for innumerable other's. Well written verse on a solumn realization.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/26/2016 3:48:00 PM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 2:36:00 PM

Monica, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/26/2016 10:50:00 AM

Monica, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@