Adell Foster Poet Limerick

Cheaper To Keep Her (Divorce Club)

(Haiku)- * Motive, infidelity messing with the Queen Bee's Honey*

Queen Bee sits on throne,
Bumble and drone bees as one
Sample flowers dew

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(Limerick) - *Admission of guilt leads to compensation*

Indeed this is how the story unfolds,
Pete said, "It's a poor rat with only one hole"...
Love had taught a sad lesson;
Divorce court was now in session,
Judge rules favor, Pete's pockets full of holes...

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(Couplet) - *Take vows seriously payback often belongs to Spouse - Queen Bee*

Love said, "Pete too late you've opened your peepers"....
"Man, you should know it was cheaper to please her"!






Submitted for P.D.'s Divorce Club Contest (Haiku-Limerick-Couplet)

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Sara Kendrick October 1, 2012 at 7:24 AM Stopped back by on this one..Enjoyed reading again..Thanks for stopping by ..Sara

John Loving Iii January 6, 2011 at 12:09 PM i knew you were a winner somewhere in there. if i did'nt say so already; this was a great peice. John Henry Loving III

Carolyn Devonshire December 7, 2010 at 9:49 AM This is so awesome. Really glad to see it in the winners' circle, Adell. Congratulations!

Harry Horsman December 3, 2010 at 12:41 AM congrats on these winning poems, loved them from the start. Harry

Audonus Taylor December 2, 2010 at 4:49 PM This is simply amazing.... Wow, I am impressed... No wonder you got a win, you definately earned it...Amazing Work!

Michael J. Falotico December 2, 2010 at 2:49 PM Congrats on your win!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta December 2, 2010 at 12:40 PM Congratulations on this high place win in the contest, Adell

Sheri Fresonke Harper December 2, 2010 at 8:54 AM lol, fun set, love your use of dialogue, congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A December 2, 2010 at 6:55 AM Adell) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

Tahera Mannan December 2, 2010 at 6:47 AM Many congratulations Adell for this wonderful win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 2, 2010 at 6:22 AM Congrats Adell on your big win in P.D.'s super contest on divorce.. with this brilliant entry luv.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch piece.. with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown December 2, 2010 at 5:48 AM Congratulations Adell for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

Harry Horsman December 1, 2010 at 5:13 PM love these Adell, good luck in contest. Harry

Andrea Dietrich November 30, 2010 at 11:07 PM heeheehee, I pity PD having to choose among some of these funny ones!! Luv,Andrea

Joy Wellington November 30, 2010 at 8:48 PM Adell, good luck in PD's contest, I am still giggling at your Couplet. Po Pete! Blessing and thanks for stopping by. Luv Joy (Jew)

Daver Austin November 30, 2010 at 7:11 AM "It's a poor rat with only one hole." I like that line AND the rest too. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Sara Kendrick November 30, 2010 at 4:43 AM Congratulations on your great work being featured on homepage..Sara

Cecil Hickman November 29, 2010 at 10:53 PM so very cute and so much more,,truly enjoyed,Best of luck in contest and congratulations on your being featured,,and Thank You also for reading and leaving a comment behind upon my words,,Blessings..Cecil

Tahera Mannan November 29, 2010 at 7:48 PM A very witty write my friend. Congrats on being featured. Love the couplet.

November 29, 2010 at 12:28 PM Thank you Adell and congratulations to you as well for being featured.Very funny and good luck in P.D's contest.Sandra

Sarah Hales November 29, 2010 at 12:10 PM this is great well done you poet friend xx thank you for commenting on my work also x sarah x

Carol Sunshine Brown November 29, 2010 at 7:02 AM A well deserved featured poem you have here Adell. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire November 29, 2010 at 2:05 AM Oh, these are terrific, Adell!! Divorce court isn't fun and women sometimes walk away with the dough. Florida is a community property state though, and everything is split evenly. Got a great laugh reading your entry and I know it's a winner! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick November 27, 2010 at 5:21 AM Cute one..Got a chuckle..Good luck in the contest with this excellent work reads like a winner to me..I was delighted that you stopped by my work , read and commented..It made my day..Sara

Marilyn Hernandez November 26, 2010 at 5:16 PM Hahaha! LOVED your limerick! Good luck to you too!

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