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The sky was limpid, and the sun rose splendidly. When I urged ardent nature to pen, it did so swiftly. Scarcely note the key themes that interest you. Every ultimate bit of it, except for alive human outdo. Nature said this with a whimsical smile on her face. Something is I've tossed gently on the glossy surface. I carefully cleared a major, fruitless stretch of land. To heave you up and grasp you a tarnished hand. "We embrace it as an image of regard," she said. Otherwise, flawlessly talk about ideas and spread. Some stamp their eager feet, while others shudder. The rhythm serves a fantastic selection and splutter. Gracious, devoted mother!" "What has you so angry?" However, you will shape a verse, not bow and rusty. You'll soon observe a stylish and vibrant atmosphere. Nobody to hurt or convey, that's blood blasphemer. Mother, I'm sorry for the errors we've bombed. And I'm very sure it won't get a standing to applaud.  We sincerely apologize for damaging your outfit. I joyfully promise we won't make the same misfit.  Please, dear child, set down your passionate weeping. All this old lady need obtain gentle care and loving.   We all commit errors, but we must learn from them.  That's why you're my finest triumph! In this realm.
Written: November 20, 2021

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Date: 11/20/2021 12:11:00 PM
God created Nature perfectly and it gives back what was created. ~~
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Date: 11/20/2021 10:46:00 AM
Mother Nature's gifts to us are countless. We should never take them for granted. Your brilliantly written poem says it all so well. Evelyn
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Date: 11/20/2021 12:57:00 PM
Thanks for your delightful comment Evelyn, it,s so kind of you
Date: 11/20/2021 9:31:00 AM
Mother Nature will ever remain the Light, mentor, leader and guide.. Mother Nature will ever be of grace and sublime majesty.. We are just mentees learning from her wisdom feeding from her genuine might and mystery.. What a unique rendition of the binding relationship Nature and human nature! So much enjoyed your wonderful poetry, Lassad! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 11/20/2021 12:58:00 PM
Besma, thank you very much for your delightful comment. It really means a lot to me. I hope you're doing well.
Date: 11/20/2021 8:51:00 AM
We have certainly abused her Lasaad, I just hope it's not too late to make ammends Tom
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Date: 11/20/2021 12:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. I appreciate your uplifting words and kind feedback. Have a great weekend
Date: 11/20/2021 8:11:00 AM
I hear a sincere, heartfelt dialogue with mother nature. The world should heed your warning, Lasaad.
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Date: 11/20/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay, your comment means a lot to me, and it's so appreciated.

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