Chasms

That seemingly uncrossable chasm Between youth and as old age Is all too easily bridged As tomorrows become yesterdays

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Julie Draper

Date: 5/11/2023 10:47:00 PM

Fabulous and succinct. I enjoyed this very much :)

Terry Ireland
Date: 5/14/2023 1:26:00 AM

Thanks Julie

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/11/2023 1:40:00 PM

brilliant! bravo to you for this one, terry!

Terry Ireland
Date: 5/14/2023 1:26:00 AM

Thanks ilene. We have to accept the inevitable, and better with grace.

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/11/2023 7:10:00 AM

Agreed! It also seems the bridge is not quite as long as it appears. I liked reading your thoughts today, Terry. Be well!

Terry Ireland
Date: 5/14/2023 1:25:00 AM

Thanks Daniel - I think we become more philosophical as the gap closes.