Chasm

Shine not tonight moon Garden blooms spray no bouquet Night wind no dancing - Let tears just flow by my bed Fill this chasm 'tween me and death. 2.13.14

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Kp Nunez

Date: 2/21/2015 9:09:00 PM

Beautiful in its sadness, my dear Daughter of the Moon. May not only tears, but also smile and laughter, fill the chasm between us and death. As we journey through life, I've found that only those who have shed the saddest tears can ever have the happiest of laughter. Here's to a colorful life ahead, O Daughter of the Moon. May you fully feel each moment of time, that you'll have a great story to tell upon reaching the other bank. A 7! Hugs and smiles. :D Kim

Hija De La Luna
Date: 2/23/2015 6:39:00 AM

Yes, dear Kim, that is our greatest hope! Thank you. We do not shun tears..we taste it, bathe in it even, for we know it will make us appreciate more the "little" things in life. Let us weave beautiful stories! Hugs and smiles back!!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/20/2015 7:18:00 AM

Oh tears fill this chasm 'tween me and death... grand conclusion. Brilliant work Hija..love

Hija De La Luna
Date: 2/20/2015 7:40:00 AM

thank you, Rajat, for the visit and the appreciation!