Chasm

An empty echo bellows from within the depths of a chasm. Endless and cold, it moans an apathy that desecrates the sanctity of love and alters the signal of all feeling and emotion. It reaches and bites the heart, concealing from vision its true mission of destruction. Tightly wrapping itself around the soul, it plunges its deadly sting through its victim, cutting off the gentle flowing mixture of happiness, sincerity, laughter and devotion. Mindless faces speak a meaningless language. The lips seem to move in an endless array of contours as a lone silhouette vanishes with the last beam of light. Alone it stands as it silently waits for time to pass. Alone in these vast depths of indifference, there is no hope, no salvation from the inward conflict that evaporates the soul. Bow your head little sparrow. Weep the tears that none else can. Reveal the pain that none else will. Lift your eyes to a destiny. Take the future up in your tiny wings and bring it back to me. Together we can cry over the past and fly away. Darkness is the absence of light, yet you and I see. Within the chasm flickers a small candle. To you and I little sparrow, no freedom is too distant, no change too great. We persist with love where blind hatred dwells. Lingering within us is a hope, a dream and purpose that lifts the wind beneath our wings. We've tasted the bottom of the chasm. Together we can cry over the past and fly away..........

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Date: 8/23/2024 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage. Although frought with sadness, the imagery is beautiful and moving.
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Date: 8/21/2024 11:57:00 AM
Beautiful, really enjoyed reading!!
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:31:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/3/2023 10:08:00 AM
I've set here for several minutes trying to come up with a comment that would describe how much I enjoyed this. I simply don't have the words to do it any justice. So, Walter, I apologize for not being able to compliment your writing in the way it deserves. I'll just say thank you.
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Date: 3/3/2023 7:48:00 PM
I love the storyline. When you catch light anothers purpose... your own light still beams. One by one... we can light up the world! Beautiful write <3
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Date: 3/23/2022 7:29:00 PM
This poem describes the uncharted current of the collective human soul.
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Date: 1/6/2022 5:25:00 AM
Hi Walter really enjoyed your write, and Congratulations on the feature It mirrors a lot of our realities Since 2020 to date.'
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Date: 11/20/2020 10:28:00 AM
love this excellent lovely flow. well done. impressed and inspired.
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Date: 11/19/2020 12:52:00 AM
brilliant writings
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Date: 2/27/2016 4:03:00 AM
Greetings Robert. Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/24/2016 10:32:00 AM
You have powerful images in your write. I would only suggest line breaks, this was a pleasure to read.
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:06:00 PM
WALTER:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year.. Good luck in all you do, just in case I don't stop a second time before the 2015 ends ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 8/8/2015 7:03:00 AM
Congrats for having your work featured in PS home page Walter!
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:59:00 PM
Walter, WOW... THIS IS THE SECOND TIME THIS POEM IS FEATURED.... SKAT
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Date: 6/2/2015 11:23:00 PM
WALTER, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 9/29/2013 11:17:00 AM
Hello Walter, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA
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Date: 5/2/2012 10:55:00 PM
STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....
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Walter Williams
Date: 5/3/2012 3:01:00 AM
As always, I have to thank you very much Elliot...You're too kind
Date: 4/30/2012 11:01:00 AM
Hey, at first glance it looks like prose bt it is most definitely not! Nice work Walter!
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Walter Williams
Date: 4/30/2012 11:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Vicky.....Very kind........ Walter
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